Well, I think there is a simpler explanation for that.
First, note that we have
$$H|\psi\rangle = i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}|\psi\rangle ~~~(1)$$
That is, if Hamiltonian acts on its eigenstates, we would have that equality (This is Schrodinger equation after all, it gives eigenstates ($|\psi_n\rangle$) of Hamiltonian)(*see my edit at the bottom of answer). However, if we assume an arbitrary state, say $|\phi_m\rangle$ which is not an eigenstate of hamiltonian, we can't say anymore:
$$H|\phi_m\rangle = i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}|\phi_m\rangle$$
Rather we have to say
$$H|\phi_m\rangle = \sum_n i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}|\psi_n\rangle\langle \psi_n|\phi_m\rangle$$
That is, we have to expand $|\phi_n\rangle$ in term of $|\psi_n\rangle$.
Another important note, if an operator like A acts on a state, say $|m_n\rangle$ we don't have this equality:
$$A|m_n\rangle = a|m_n\rangle$$
Unless of course we assume that $|m_n\rangle$ is an eigenstate of A. So generally speaking we have:
$$A|m_n\rangle = a|Q_n\rangle$$
That is, an operator like A changes state $|m_n\rangle$ to something else, unless $|m_n\rangle$ happens to be an eigenstate of A.
Let's go back to your question. Note that $|\psi \rangle$ is NOT an eigenstate of A, It is a summation of eigenstates of Hamiltonian. So we have:
$$\frac{d}{dt}\langle \psi| A |\psi \rangle = \frac{d}{dt}(\langle \psi|)~~A |\psi \rangle + \langle \psi|~~\frac{d}{dt}(A |\psi \rangle)~~~(2)$$
$$\frac{d}{dt}(\langle \psi|)~~A |\psi \rangle = \frac{-1}{i\hbar}(\langle H\psi|)~~A |\psi \rangle = \frac{-1}{i\hbar}\langle \psi|HA |\psi \rangle ~~~(3)$$
So far so good, but this is where you did the math wrong. Note that in (3), $\frac{d}{dt}$ acts on $\langle \psi|$, so we can use conjugation of equation (1) with no problem. But for second term in (2), we can't do that. because $A$ changes $|\psi \rangle$ to something else.
Let's say $|f_n\rangle$ is eigenstate of A. So we can say:
$$\langle \psi|~~\frac{d}{dt}(A |\psi \rangle) = \langle \psi|~~ \sum_n \frac{d}{dt}(A|f_n\rangle \langle f_n| \psi \rangle)$$
I just expanded $|\psi \rangle$ in terms of eigenstates of A.
also $A|f_n\rangle = a_n |f_n \rangle$ so:
$$\langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n\frac{d}{dt}(|f_n\rangle \langle f_n| \psi \rangle) =
\langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n(|f_n'\rangle \langle f_n| \psi \rangle)
+ \langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n(|f_n\rangle \langle f_n'| \psi \rangle)
+ \langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n(|f_n\rangle \langle f_n| \psi '\rangle)~~(*)$$
Note that we can use (1) for third term of this equation, because after all $\frac{d}{dt}$ acts on $|\psi\rangle$ so
$$\langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n(|f_n\rangle \langle f_n| \psi '\rangle) = \frac{1}{i\hbar}\langle \psi|~~ \sum_n a_n(|f_n\rangle \langle f_n |H| \psi \rangle) = \frac{1}{i\hbar} \langle \psi|AH|\psi\rangle ~~~(4)$$
I simply re-compacted expansion. From summation of (4) and (3) we have:
$$\frac{1}{i\hbar} \langle \psi|AH|\psi\rangle - \frac{1}{i\hbar}\langle \psi|HA |\psi \rangle = \frac{1}{i\hbar} \langle [A,H] \rangle$$
remaining terms in (*) are $\langle \frac{\partial A}{\partial t}\rangle $.
*Edit: $|\psi(t) \rangle$ is not an eigenstate of hamiltonian, rather what I mean is since
$$|\psi(t) \rangle = \sum_n |\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar)$$
we can write
$$H|\psi(t) \rangle = \sum_n |H\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar)=\sum_n E_n|\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar)=i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}\sum_n |\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar) (**)$$
Thus we have:
$$H|\psi\rangle = i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}|\psi\rangle$$
But if we start with $A|\psi \rangle$ instead of $|\psi \rangle$ we will have
$$HA|\psi(t) \rangle = H\sum_n \sum_m A |f_m \rangle \langle f_m||\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar) = \sum_n \sum_m aH|f_m \rangle \langle f_m||\psi_n \rangle exp(-iE_nt/\hbar)$$ But we know that $H |f_m \rangle \neq E|f_m \rangle$ since $|f_m \rangle$ is not an eigenstate of Hamiltonian, unless $[H,A] = 0$ which is not the case in general. So we can't assume $HA|\psi(t) \rangle = i\hbar\frac{d}{dt}(A|\psi(t) \rangle)$, because writing something like (**) for it, is not possible. As simple as that.